TIME LOSS: We loose how much time has passed without the additional panels of Ken psychotically crushing one rock after another.
SUGGESTION: An extra speech bubble from Ina, just left of her first one – “He’s been blocking those rocks for ages.” – “Maybe you should help out.” OR “This has been going on all day.” or some other variant.
Tweaked it a bit. Quite some time must have passed for an entire rock quarry to be emptied, but it is unbelievable that Ina would sit through all that without making some comment.
TIME LOSS: We loose how much time has passed without the additional panels of Ken psychotically crushing one rock after another.
SUGGESTION: An extra speech bubble from Ina, just left of her first one – “He’s been blocking those rocks for ages.” – “Maybe you should help out.” OR “This has been going on all day.” or some other variant.
Tweaked it a bit. Quite some time must have passed for an entire rock quarry to be emptied, but it is unbelievable that Ina would sit through all that without making some comment.
“WE HAVE BROKEN EVERY ROCK IN THE QUARRY! DO YOU LIKE YOUR ODDS NOW?!?!?”
I think he’s broken all the homerun records. And the rocks.