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  • charles81

    Text Sense: First panel text bubble by Cho doesn’t seem to come across right. They don’t want to honor the master’s memory, they just insulted him for choice of Cho as replacement. I seem to recall the old text actually had Cho suggesting they simply go back and lead the clan while Cho follow’s the will of the tao to it’s end.

    Suggestion: “and[. I] will [remain and] follow the Tao to whatever end it leads”

    • jwkovell

      I’ve made changes all over the place for this one!

      Hopefully the jealousy of the brothers Wu and Tang becomes more obvious. They probably respect Master Zhao as much as Cho, but their envy colors their actions.

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