This has been corrected. Thanks!
TEXT RETHINK: consider revising Ayane’s last line to ASK if they detected his presence.
Added some emphasis to her statement. However, I’m making it more of an order or statement as ninjas are NEVER followed, right? Right?
I believe in panel 4 that Ayane meant to say ‘our ability’ instead of ‘out’.
I agree! She totally meant to say “our”. Maybe if I mention this again, they’ll notice your correction! : – )
Say it. Don’t spray it.
Ninja’s go UNDETECTED.
Yeah! especially the one BEHIND you…
They were completely unaware of hrk spewing. Definitely unaware of it. Such stealthy spewing.
I’m sorry you were saying something? All I heard was a “hrk”