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In panel 3, Ina is breathless and could use a comma, like so: “You’re not even a nurse, are you?”
jwkovell
Got it!
Nick Godby
FREAKIN GRAMMER NAZI`s
Katie Balfour
GrammAr C:
And no apostrophe.
Kid Chaos
GRAMMAR SNOBS. EVERYWHERE. 😜
Da’Zlein
No guys, he’s super hurt, you gotta learn to sell it better…
Speedy Marsh
No, he’s not fine. It’s just the sword had nothing to do with him collapsing. He got kicked so hard, he passed out, and his mind took him to a time before they dropped.
DrPluton
“My friend has too many swords in him” really made me chuckle.
AGV
Oh my kami this is the best page so far X’D
Quiet Mastermind
Give you fashion tips
Quiet Mastermind
Wake up, you puss
Insane Disciple
Well, he’s bruised, cut his lip, and some light bleedy. Damn, that Berserk, One Piece, and JoJo gore levels😨
