If by “brilliant” you mean “stupid”, then certainly…
Put on your wigs and makeup peeps, it’s showtime!
But instead, we’ll go with the insane plan of joining you up there on stage.
“The cabaret, join the cabaret…”
“Life is a cabaret, my friends…” 😎
Not sure if you’re still looking for corrections but there’s an extra “you” in the second speach balloon in panel two.
I’m living this by the way, great comic