“This time, it’s personal!”
“Masuhiro’s Escape – Part 3”
INCONSISTENCY: Two pages back, Suzuka refers to Yorikiro only as “Samurai Boy” but here Masuhiro seems aware that they are hunting Yorikiro Wataro.
Right, he gets his info from the bandits earlier in the book. Her phrase merely supports it.
Yeah, I was reading backwards through the pages for an alternative view/experience/perspective that can sometimes help to catch things.
Need a comma between “Sorry” and “Masuhiro,” and “Good night” is two words.
Fixed! While I was at it, I switched out the “good night”, as it felt rather redundant.
GRAMMAR SNOBS. EVERYWHERE.
If he keeps escaping like this he’ll build up a tolerance to the knockout drugs, then they won’t be able to stop him!
Hey, it’s a plan! …of sorts.
Well, at least he won’t have any problem with material for his pleasant dreams.
One would think he would learn that sticking around after escaping his cell equals getting recaptured. Somehow, his learning curve seems fairly horizontal…
one day masuhiro… one day, your time will come
But that day is not to-day. 😜