In panel 3, Ina is breathless and could use a comma, like so: “You’re not even a nurse, are you?”
FREAKIN GRAMMER NAZI`s
And no apostrophe.
No guys, he’s super hurt, you gotta learn to sell it better…
No, he’s not fine. It’s just the sword had nothing to do with him collapsing. He got kicked so hard, he passed out, and his mind took him to a time before they dropped.
“My friend has too many swords in him” really made me chuckle.
Oh my kami this is the best page so far X’D