524 Alt Dialog



We determined this dialog to be TOO DIRTY for the comic’s canon, but I wrote this page initially because we didn’t have a finalized script at first, just a note that somehow Ayane beats Masuhiro. It’s a little TOO OVERT maybe, but it had me laughing for hours, I KID YOU NOT. We changed the dialog because in this version Masuhiro’s saying very dirty stuff and can’t stop himself for no good reason, while in the other version Masuhiro’s trying to apologize for poor word usage, which is a bit more in character for him.

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  • Neoriceisgood

    This is amazing.

  • KungFuKlobber

    He seems to be having difficulty handling his sword in the last panel. That’s all I’m saying.